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The attitude we should cultivate is, everything is God's. I am just an instrument in His hands here to do His work.   -Amma

Start with a short prayer. "Amma, make me an instrument of Your will. Amma, You do the writing, I will simply be the pen in Your hand." Chant your mantra and meditate for a few minutes. Then begin. As you write your story, remember to keep praying and asking Amma for guidance.

 

Basic Format:  Example Story

Alternative Formats

 

Most stories in Volume 1 followed the basic format outlined below. For Volume 2, we encourage writers to also experiment using alternative formats. These were suggested by writers and readers who participated in Volume 1. Our hope is to incorporate the learning from Volume 1 to further enhance this offering for our beloved Amma.

 

Basic Format:  A first darshan story has several of the following elements.

  • It is the complete story of how one came to Amma, that is how one became Her child and the impact She has had on one's life over the years.
  • It is written in a conversational and natural style and feels like the writer is speaking on the page.
  • It proceeds in a chronological manner. 
  • It states the month, year and place (and date if available) in the opening paragraph, either of the first meeting with Amma or of any other significant event the writer chooses to begin with, such as the first time one heard about Amma.
  • It includes a brief description of one's spiritual background and one's approximate age before meeting Amma in the opening paragraph(s). 
  • It describes the first meeting with Amma in great detail (thoughts upon entering the hall, upon seeing Amma for the very first time, about other things such as the music, the number of people, Amma's talk, other conversations, if any, and so forth...)
  • It describes honestly and with feeling, the first darshan, that is the first hug from Amma.
  • It briefly describes the next few meetings with Amma if they occurred over the next few days or weeks. 
  • It briefly describes family members' or friends' experiences if they met Amma at the same time.
  • It states in a few paragraphs after the first darshan, the journey with Amma over the years.
  • It not only is a narrative of things seen and heard, but an honest sharing of feelings, fears, emotions, etc. that come from the depths of the writer's heart...readers state again and again that this is what touches them and makes the story memorable...
  • It briefly states the learning that has come from being Amma's child...that is how Amma's love has helped one become a better individual...this is perhaps one of the most important elements in the story and also a good way to end. 
  • It has mostly short paragraphs.
  • It is mostly between 1000-2000 words...although there is no strict word limit.
  • It uses dialog for conversations, if there is room to build that in the story.  Use of dialog is a great way to make the reader feel as if he or she is present, as if the story is happening right then. 
  • It is proof-read by a family member or friend...it is usually easier for another person to notice any 'gaps' or 'holes' in the story...

Happy writing!! As you write, don't forget to keep praying and asking Amma for guidance! 

Om Amriteshwaryai Namah! 

 

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